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Ghettogirlblue
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Posted on Sunday, November 20, 2005 - 06:48 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

The Cutting
of the Rose



Though you talk to me with sweetness
on your breath and in your heart,
My body will not rise to feel
your meaning in whole, or in part.

I am a woman without a doubt
my servitude is the measure,
Your expectant stance and countenance
is but my single pleasure.

You will never have to worry, my love
If I shall ever stray,
For the offending thorn of my desire
has been sharply cut away.

Tuned and pruned to suit my groom
I am the comely bride,
Submitting to my husband�s will
without desire but with pride.

I am free from worldly sins
for the path I chose,
May Allah bless the garden keepers
for the cutting of the rose.

by Jessica Holter, Founder, The Punany poets"Punany's Pearl" Art by GGB
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Rondall
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Posted on Monday, November 21, 2005 - 02:09 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

I like this picture much better!!!

Both in the poem and the attachment!!
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Yesayah
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Posted on Monday, April 10, 2006 - 08:44 am:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

"The cutting of the rose"
Hmm....beautiful piece.

A Muslim woman reflecting on "Mutilation"

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