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Chrishayden
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Posted on Monday, April 07, 2008 - 02:51 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

River City Dance

by Chris Hayden

A city aint just concrete and stone
Steel

O no

Aint just roads black asphalt grumbling
groaning
neath the wheel


A city be flesh blood bone
Spirit and soul

People
Make a city a city
Good people city people good people
Like walls are made up
Of single bricks

People make a city a city

People drummin buck dancin be boppin

African people
Fon and Anajo people
Hausa People
Mandinka People

People Ashanti and Fulani
Ibo Yoruba

Ochosi people Ifa people Awo people

People of Esu Elegba Shango Oduduwa Oshun

Say praise in the Mother Toungue
Odede odede odede
Odede iwa lere kanfora

(Stand tall stand tall stand tall
Stand tall with the character of goodness)

Ase people

Asante sana people

people wood carvin griot tellin divinin Benin bronzeworkin
laughin bright as
kente cloth weavin

People in love with D'Drum

People with respect for and remembrance of The Ancestors

People of the N'goma Youth of the Yari Yari

BeboppinRockRollinHipHoppin

A kidnapped bridge
Of black flesh and blood spannin the Atlantic to the
Caribbean
And the South
Down Home

New Orleans
Sister River City at the Mouth of the Delta

Beboppin Beatin Beatin Black
Black beat into the Heart of River City
Made a trading station by the Frenchman
Choutea and Laclede
Who named it
For the Saint

People coming up Here
From Down South
Ridin Underground railway steel
Rafts and boats
Leapin like trout
Votin with their feet
Seekin the Promised Land

Bearing charms hoodoos

People of the Great Migration Exodusters trekkin to The
Lou

Up with Satchmo and Jazz on the riverboats from Storyville
People with their sorrow songs and spirituals and quilting
and home cooking
woodcutting and tall tales and big talking and boogies
barrell house and
blues and singing

Adding to the French Spanish Anglo Irish German Slavic St.
Looie stew
Mojospice Hoodoojuice
Many mixed Afrikan tribes
and the European
And the Native American
The black lump in the melting pot

Razzing white powdered wigged classics like Scott Joplin
Rags

The A to Z
Of the gateway City

People

Doin dat River City Dance

Copyright Chris Hayden 2008
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Rondall
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Posted on Tuesday, April 08, 2008 - 02:53 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

So Elegba says to me, listen...and the Chrishayden spoke.

Nice contribution sir, flowed like rain water.

And it is still early in the month...more, more, more

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Cynique
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Posted on Thursday, April 10, 2008 - 03:42 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

What better way to follow an epic poem than a hailku one? Here's mine:

nation at the cross roads
race intersects the campaign
her fast and him black

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Rondall
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Posted on Thursday, April 10, 2008 - 08:46 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Nice Cynique...I like the crossroads/elegba tie in...you did mean to that, right?


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Cynique
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Posted on Friday, April 11, 2008 - 02:21 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

What does "elegba" mean, Rondall? My intent was to give the word "race" 2 meanings.
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Rondall
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Posted on Friday, April 11, 2008 - 03:00 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Elegba or Elegua: One the original West African orishas or "gods" brought over during the diaspora. Known as the messenger, he stands at the crossroads listening so that he may interceed.


Sorry about the confusion Miss C.
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Cynique
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Posted on Friday, April 11, 2008 - 05:24 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Thank you for filling me in, Rondell.
When I think of the cross roads, I'm always reminded of Robert Johnson, the black blues legend who was said to have gone to the cross roads where he met the devil and sold his soul to him in exchange for becoming the fantastic guitarist that he was, supposedly able to play his instrument the way a person played a piano.
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Rondall
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Posted on Friday, April 11, 2008 - 08:35 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Interesting story and I know it well (I love me some Robert Johnson). By the way, the reason the reference to crossroads is similar to that story is because Europeans have equated the entity of Elegba or Elegua as being equivalent to the devil. Hence, in practice he is also known as the orisha of mischief. (And no, really he is NOT Satan: see wiki: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eleggua )


Much love to Cynique...much love indeed
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Cynique
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Posted on Friday, April 11, 2008 - 10:34 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

I am terrible with names. Sorry I spelled yours wrong, "RONDALL"! :-)
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Rondall
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Posted on Monday, April 14, 2008 - 09:20 am:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

I noticed the errrrrr...no big deal

I still love ya like a rock!

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