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Theliterarythug
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Posted on Saturday, December 01, 2007 - 04:25 am:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Your son shermed to death in makeshift car
His loss was felt but yours was felt the more
Don’t be a dad tonight, go to the bar.

His momma cries and prays to morning star
Praying that he reach celestial shore
Your son, shermed to death in makeshift car

Forgive us for not getting “who you are”.
But please forgive away from worship door
Don’t be a dad tonight, go to the bar.

A girfriends mourns a body burned to char
Embalmed in a butane threshing floor
Your son, shermed to death in makeshift car.

A whole church grieves in ways you feel afar .
But you don’t know the one their grieving for
Don’t be a dad tonight, go to the bar.

Save the crying rap for the ripple jar.
The only brown thing you showed feeling for.
Your son shermed to death in makeshift car.
Don’t be a dad tonight, go to the bar.

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