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Theliterarythug
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Username: Theliterarythug

Post Number: 2
Registered: 11-2007

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Posted on Saturday, December 01, 2007 - 04:23 am:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

COREY PITMAN

Quiet are the words of the people who mourn you
Penitent, sorrowful,
In pentacostal squares only we can seem to see
They mention your name in Sunday service
In salon, at the barbershop
In those impertinent times when the mention
Of someone’s hope, potential, and possibility
Crosses someone’s lips
For you have made them Antigone’s children, Corey
Baked in the muscle memory of the delta and the sound
Desperately trying to give you a proper burial
They are a subverts to your angry ghost
And what a gang did to a neighborhood in doing to you
They were the Crips. They were mighty
And they could even kill your dreams

And 10 years after you were smoked
The shut-ins will shut themselves in a little tighter
Giving witness with their mental state
Because no one else has or will
For sight and sound is memory, Corey
And memory never forgets the unmourned
The unburied
The random incidentals of this blue and red war
Grandmothers. Aunties. Uncles. Children
Smoked for inconvenience, for Sunday
Change, for ritual, for their protestations
Of being human, for the temerity of being a
ASU student on a side street
In which a gang preferred the color blue
The shut in does not fear death, for death
Is quick, final, never instilling fear by
Blue bandanna, and death
Yes, death never took your dreams


And every time I go to the hill where you were smoked
The sky seems to bleed a burning red
Tormenting in visions of crimson over crimson over crimson
You were a freshman turned monument, Corey
Fiber, flesh, bone, optic, hope, turned to dust
A human symbol stating “ hilltop, we are your god
Oh we may have stalked your corners
Tormented all your yesterdays
And ran our drugs unchecked
But we will even kill your dreams
So rue us in your walk, curse us in your speech
And defile us in your baited breath
But don’t even think to counter us other wise
For we are the Crips
Dark riders in this project industrial storm
And we are mighty
And we can even kill your dreams
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Cynique
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Post Number: 10767
Registered: 01-2004

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Posted on Saturday, December 01, 2007 - 03:52 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Having lost a young loved one to random gun violence, I can appreciate this poem.
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Chrishayden
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Post Number: 5852
Registered: 03-2004

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Posted on Friday, December 07, 2007 - 04:40 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Bring dat ole Poetree back to life!

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