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     Watastar Veteran Poster Username: Watastar Post Number: 55 Registered: 07-2004 Rating: N/A |
Greetings, my fellow beautiful people. I have missed so many of you. How have you been? (a freestyle) "Never Expressed Love Quite Like This/Love's Nature Walk" Watastar I've loved I have loved Oh I HAVE loved Loving ain't nothin' new Gon' love for the rest of my life Been lovin' all my life any ol' way Expressin' it all my life, too But not this And not on this level If I could ever truly say that I believed in at least one mate to every soul, It is only because I have looked deep into your soul only to stare at my own I love you No I really, really love you I'm talkin' bout Love you while you flowin', wearing the crown that fits you so well I love you while you all of balance, but still fighting your way through this Hell Love you when you so fresh and so clean Love you when you on the toilet droppin' them hot, wet terds, too. LOL The point is My love does not change It has never changed You were my friend Long before you were half of my life I love you I have never expressed love quite like this Our expression of love is like... it's like a walk on a beautiful nature trail Some people are just not honest about the walk on a beautiful nature trail Yes, it's nice, it is beautiful... but they don't never mention all 'da mosquitoes they done had to slap off You might even see a mouse or two And goodness knows I know they have their place in this world, But goodness also knows that I could go my whole life without seeing one and not at all regret it But yes, the nature trail is so beautiful.. the walk is so nice Yet walking and walking can make the legs tired or even the spirit I cannot say that I have not at times been drained But that was mostly when my focus was against my Spirit's instructions I love your soul And I know you love mine I am by your side on this nature trail In the blazing sun In the pouring rain Might even have to stop when it rains too hard Go sit down somewhere, dry off and go at it again when things are dry Not like it has not happened before But you know what This walk has made our legs so strong It has strengthened our hearts and has nurtured our souls I long to walk with you for the rest of my life and even when my life is over In retrospect...no...I have never ever ever expressed love quite like this P.S. If you are out there, Cynique, guess wut? ISE MARRIED NOW! Okay, well not yet, but Ah "iz" engaged and am gettin' murried nekz month. (Oh shoot, I wonda if my two baby daddies [Lambd and Abm] heard that! Oh dear!!!]) | ||
| Cynique "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Cynique Post Number: 2454 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
Congratulations on your marriage, watastar! Great poem. You haven't lost a step. As for ABM and Lambd, they quit the board... I also found your African/African-America essay interesting. Nowadays, so many young black folks are soul searching, looking for solutions to the monumental problem facing their race, and I give you all an "E" for effort. | ||
| Rondall Moderator Username: Rondall Post Number: 69 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
Congrats to you and yours Watastar!!! Any man or woman is lucky to find a poet as a mate... or so my wife tells me. | ||
| Watastar Veteran Poster Username: Watastar Post Number: 58 Registered: 07-2004 Rating: N/A |
Oh that's so precious, Cynique. Nah, it's actually on the 17th of this month, though.(lol I put it after the "P.S.") I'd love to say that I wrote that interesting essay, but a Nigerian born/NY based bro from Nigeria actually wrote it (wut oh, I hope I ain't accidentally put "By The Marvelous Watastar".LOLOL) Rondall, thank you so very much. I tend to believe that your wife is RIGHT! MAnd my sweety pie happens to be a highly skilled wordsmith. :-) |
