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Greeneyedrican
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Username: Greeneyedrican

Post Number: 3
Registered: 09-2004

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Posted on Thursday, September 09, 2004 - 10:15 am:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Losing you
Is like
never being able to touch
the bottom of the swimming pool,
making calculations
hushed sentences.

Thoughts of us
tiptoe past me as if I'm dead
I'm not
just feels that way,
especially at night with the
fan circulating cold air on my naked back.

I miss you
but not as you'd expect
wishing we were
passionate,
even loud
like a whistling tea pot.

The enevitable
is drawing to a close
like the drapes on a sunny
afternoon,
and everyone is smiling
because they all wanted
undeveloped film
and absent anniverseries.

nonetheless, I still love you
infinity...

© 2004 Green Eyes Open
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Watastar
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Username: Watastar

Post Number: 52
Registered: 07-2004

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Posted on Wednesday, September 22, 2004 - 07:33 am:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Oh now that was just liquid! NICE! ;-)

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