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cedric sr

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Posted on Tuesday, February 25, 2003 - 12:20 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

How i write is so beautiful.
My poetry catches the readers eye
so powerful.
I write what i feel
some what like a rap song
My feelings flow when i write
Like vanilla pudding it makes you want more
My poetry can be contagious like the flu
I make this sound easy but its tuff
Its tuff like old porkchops
but i can never get enough
As i write this poem
I`m in a state of mind
No one can touch me
This is my weapon
My harnessed weapon and gift
this my rap song
true to all it`s words. please e-mail your thuoghts.
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Chris hayden

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Posted on Tuesday, February 25, 2003 - 01:10 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Cedric--your son has the gift. His poem is skilled and sophisticated beyond his 14 years. Tell him to keep on keepin on
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SkyeBlu

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Posted on Tuesday, February 25, 2003 - 03:54 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

That was absolutely phenomenal! He truly is a talent beyond his years! I can't wait to hear more!
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Kenneth White

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Posted on Wednesday, February 26, 2003 - 11:54 am:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Keep encouraging him. That is a tight flow.

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