| Author | Message | ||
     Rising_star First Time Poster Username: Rising_star Post Number: 1 Registered: 06-2004 Rating: N/A |
From my window I look through the water stains Cant see in front of me To busy remembering when it last rained So bright and beautiful today Its a fresh new start Building dreams of clay holding on to no family/friends and a broken heart Today never felt so good being thankful to be alive??i should And I know pain only helps us grow But I still cant get past the stains on my window Inside my tears destroy my dreams Speaking in silence,inside I scream Another day,another chance to spirtually grow But I cant get past the tear stains on my window!! | ||
| Lambd "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Lambd Post Number: 154 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
I like this. Rising Star, you are obviously talented. Do you have anything else that rivals this and the one called 'Karma'? Share it with the world, Star. Share it with the world! You make me want to write again. I love it when new talent comes on the poetry board and inspires me to write something. Something that I can take pride in, as opposed to the bullshit I have been putting out lately. All hail,Rising_ Star, your work is the enema for my writer's block. The Ex-lack for my cheesy poet's constipation...Thank you. Your star has risen. |
